• Books,  jack,  Weekend

    Hell Week Part Deux

    What’s Jack up to? The sweetie is still in the NYC as I write this. I’m on my way to get him in a bit so we’ll see how he is once he returns home. Will he be a Harlem dog when he gets back?

    So the DH and I had a lovely weekend filled with good friends, cocktails and lots of food. I’m suffering from a lobster hangover after attending a lobster fest this weekend where I tried to eat my weight in lobster. Ouch! The weekend started lovely and I actually dressed up and and went to a cocktail party at a good friends house. She’s an artist and friend to this blog and super chic and her cocktail party was a lovely summer night event held on her back stone patio.

    Everyone said it felt like we were in Europe somewhere. Since I’ve never attended a chic cocktail party in Europe I took their word for it and agreed.

    Then it was on to the weekend lobster fest where on the first night I proudly held my own at poker with some of my DH’s buddies and represented for the ladies and on the next day and held my own with the lobster. Whew. I’m tired.

    Now onto Hell week part 2 with the Dear Twins. Maybe I should start to call them the Wonder Twins. Anybody remember them from the Super Friends? Sorry, side thought.

    Anyhoo… I’m reading Janet Evanovich’s Full House . It’s Fun and a change of pace from last week’s historical, but I must admit I have Philippa Gregory’s The Virgin’s Lover and I may have to crack that open this week too. It’s calling my name.

    What are you up to this week?

    Best,
    Kwana

  • Books,  historicals,  jack,  romance

    Talking Historicals

    What’s Jack up to? Hold only your hats. Jack is a city dog for the weekend. He’s gone off with Nana for a couple of days to be spoiled and seduced by the bright lights of the big city. I hope he does well with real heights and doesn’t come home with too much of an attitude.


    I thought we’d talk historical romances this weekend and literary escapes. Although I write contemporary I have a big time love of historical romances. BIG TIME!

    And during Hell Week this past week one one the things that help me get though was Lisa Kleypas’ DREAMING OF YOU. I loved it! I think I got the recommendation from Kristie and Katie at Ramblings on Romance you can check them out here. It’s a great blog and a wonderful resource.

    Now I hear from PIC Megan, a wonderful historical writer herself, that it’s a book that brings out strong opinions. You either love it or hate it. I really loved it. It gave me just the escape I needed for Hell Week. Now I need something for Hell Week Part Deux because it still ain’t over yet. Can you believe that? Sigh.

    What are your favorite Literary escapes? Come on and share. Don’t be shy. We’re all friends here. I hope.

    Best,
    Kwana

    PS- Scroll down for Ask The Agent. It’s a goody!

  • Ask The Agent,  elaine spencer,  jack

    Ask The Agent- Why don’t cha?

    What’s Jack up to? He’s happy it’s Friday and he’s not a stinky dog anymore since he’s bath yesterday. Yay!

    Welcome to another Ask The Agent with fab agent Elaine Spencer form The Knight Agency. This week’ s question is a great. Props to Elaine for taking it on. Let’s just get right into it.
    I’m wondering when an author should start looking for a new agent. Is two months too long to wait for a read-through of minor rewrites?

    I think that you probably know in your heart what the answer to this question is, and really this is something that only *you* can have the definite answer on because you are the only one that really knows all the important info. If you really don’t know what you should be considering the best I can do is offer some pointers that might show you the light. And here’s my disclaimer, I’m an agent, I’m going to automatically give yours the benefit of the doubt, don’t say I didn’t warn you.

    I would love to say be super-agent and jump in and say “Its taken them TWO WHOLE MONTHS??!?! That’s ridiculous, you deserve a read within the week, that’s what I promise all of my clients!!!”. However, and Kwana can vouch for me, that would be a total lie. When I receive client material what I do try to do is immediately give them an estimate of how long it might take me to take a look at their work. Sometimes I’m able to stick to that deadline, and sometimes life happens and what once seemed very possible becomes utterly impossible.

    Two months does seem a little bit lengthy but in the defense of the agent here are the things that I would consider “get out of jail” tickets that you should cut them a break. Is this your spotlight project or is it just something minor you’ve been stewing up in the back of your mind, a “pet project”, which is in addition to other work you have submitted. How many times has the agent seen this material? Is this your first set of rewrites or your 3rd. Have you heard from your agent during those two months with an update on where you are in their reading pile and what might be the hold-up? Does your agent want to shop this project or have they already told you that deep in their heart they don’t feel like this is “the one”. Is there a market for this project or is it something that is going to be a REALLY tough sell? How much of the manuscript are they having to re-read and with how watchful of an eye? Did the agent receive 15 full manuscripts the week before you sent yours in (and yes that happens, when it rains, it pours!)?

    If the agent is unresponsive and takes two months to respond to you on anything, always, regardless of circumstances, well yes, I think its time you look around. It is important that you have someone in your corner who is going to be respectful of your time and your goals for progressing forward.

    I’m going to add my own little disclaimer in here, just because I think *good* agents often can catch a bad rep for things that are really outside of their control. As I mentioned above, life happens, and we have learned to always expect the unexpected. This past spring my career has been on a whirlwind ride. Its been fun and exciting and promising for the future, but for a brief time my clients have had to bear with me while I’ve just been treading water and trying to squeeze it all done into a day (and night’s) work.

    Times like this ebb and flow. At the end of the day even if my responses haven’t been quite as quick or quite as detailed as they typically are, my clients know that I totally adore each of them and their writing. If not, I would have cut them loose when the going got tough. They also know that while I may temporarily be in a position where I can’t get them an instantaneous answer on anything they send material or question wise, I without a doubt would drop anything in a second if anything really important would come up.

    It is an agent’s job to be available for anything at anytime, it comes with the territory and we all know it. And deep down, whether we will all admit it or not, everyone of us loves that about the job, or we wouldn’t be in agents. Still, at the end of the day we are all people, and sometimes we deserve a break just like everyone else. Sometimes we bite off more than we can chew, sometimes we find ourselves in time crunches, and sometimes we just can’t do it all.

    There have to be cut-backs somewhere, sometimes we just have to put one thing aside, ask yourself, has your agent sacrificed your best interest or is this issue really insignificant in the grand scheme of your career.

    The ultimate answer to your question lies in whether you have tried talking to your agent about what the hold-up is. Have you voiced your concerns that you aren’t getting the attention that you feel you deserve? If not, let them know you feel like you’ve been abandoned, that you are concerned about their dedication. Talk it out and see if their response is something you think is fair and justifiable. If it is, stick with them, give them one more chance, if they tell you “they’re just too busy, maybe they’ll be able to get to it next month” then perhaps you consider your other options.

    And on second thought. I hope I didn’t interpret that question wrong. It just dawned on me and I thought in my own head, “maybe they were referring specifically to the submission process, as in the agent isn’t really “theirs” just one they have submitted to and the agent requested rewrites.”

    If that’s the case, well shoot, lets make this short and sweet. After two months? Yes, move on. Don’t count the agent out yet, because sometimes as I said, things come up and we can’t move as quickly on non-client material as we wish we could (and sometimes we consequently miss out when the author does in fact go wider).

    If the agent thinks they have it on exclusive shoot them an email and let them know you are going to submit to others and let them know when you receive alternative offers. Regardless, keep your options open!

    How often do you update your clients on the submission process? Do you prefer email or phone for doing so? Just curious….

    This one is easy. I update my clients on the submission process the instant that I have anything to report. If we are at the beginning of the submission, just preparing to send out, I will let them know who I’m planning to target. I usually ask if they have anything big to add, sometimes if they have some valid point I’ll take their suggestions and other times I follow what I know is best and stick with my selection.

    After the send-out I let them know who accepts and who declines (hopefully no one to the latter!). I then update them when I’m doing follow-ups and as soon as I hear from anyone. If its an offer, well then obviously, we discuss pros/cons (if any) and move forward). If it’s a pass I forward the response word for word on directly.

    Sometimes this is via the phone sometimes via email sometimes via snail mail. That varies depending on circumstance.

    Told you it was a good one. Don’t forget to post your questions in the comments section.

    Thanks Elaine!
    best,
    Kwana
  • jack,  Reality tv,  Top Chef

    Blogging Top Chef- 1 mo’ time!

    What’s Jack up to? Poor Jack is as stinky as he can be so I guess he’ll be getting wet today when I dunk his dirty butt in a bath. Oh the fun. Not!


    So here I am blogging Top Chef one more time. It’s The Reunion show
    Whoo Hoo! Here it is as I’m thinking it.

    Gail’s covered. Tom’s in a vest- I likie. Padma’s looking like Padma and Ted’s there. Yay!
    No Richard because it was taped when his wife was giving birth. Aww.

    Loving Dale’s body language. He is so not into being there and the show is just beginning.

    Stephanie is using the money to open another restaurant in Chicago. She will be a powerhouse.
    The talk of Mark and Spike’s Bromance was just icky. And Dale and Richard? Andrew and Spike? That Spike just gets around. And Can I say how I can’t stand the word Bromance. Like I hate the term Baby bump. But I love Andrew. He’s just crazy.

    Marks of the market. He got married to an American. Hmm.

    Oh Snap! Internet rumor blow up. Zoi and Jen totally broke up, but don’t want t admit it on TV. I guess couples will think twice before signing up to compete on TC the next time. Must find out what happened. I suspect someone cheated and Zoi is was too defensive.

    Who will win fan favorite and why are they suggesting Spike? Pla-ease. Spare me.

    Love the idea of The Stew Room and what the judges do during that time. So funny.

    Dale talk. Yes! Tom disagreed with the decision. Dale was a big man though. I still heart him.
    Lisa’s scowl. Yech! Ha, Lisa got dirty looks at a lesbian party. Too funny. I love that.

    Best of Andrew. ADD. Advanced Dungeons and Dragons. Great! You know he could win fan favorite and I wouldn’t be surprised. And Andrew’s “Culinary Boner” line won the t-shirt contest this year.

    Top fights:
    4. Dale vs. Andrew
    3. Lisa vs. Dale
    2. Lisa vs. Andrew
    1. Spike vs. Antonia vs .Jen vs. Dale vs. Lisa .What?
    Good Times!

    Hey it’s Richard via satellite with a sort-a-hawk? You can tell he was up all night. He’s opening another restaurant. See I knew he was going to be fine.

    Now for fan favorite…. And it’s… wait Tom just dissed Lisa and said it won’t be her. I can’t stop laughing. Ha. That is too mean. I want to see the mush face again. David Dust are you out there?

    Ok now to fan favorite. It’s… Stephanie!! All around a great year for the super woman.

    Best
    Kwana

    PS: Scroll down for a fun book review video. We should all be so lucky.

  • jack,  motherhood,  teens

    Hell Week

    What’s Jack up to? He’s being a Jackster. Barking like crazy whenever another dog prances by. No matter how sweet or silent that other dog is or how friendly the other dog’s owner is by smiling and waving kindly at us. So embarrassing, Jack.

    So, I’m in the midst of hell week with the Dear Twins. It’s finals week at the high school with tests scheduled all different hours. Some in the morning and some in the afternoon and the kids only have to come in for their tests or for different study sessions if they want so it’s mom On Call all the time.

    Besides that I’m in the middle of pure adolescent hell and my motto of “I’m not mature enough for this job” is really being proven. Every day new situations arise that just baffle my mind. I’m exhausted.

    Note to self: must talk with hairdresser about these pesky grey hairs that have popped out this week. Ugh!

    Best,

    Kwana
  • jack,  Reality tv,  The Bachelorette,  writing

    2 for Tuesday

    What’s Jack up to? He’s running around happy today. Nana’s visiting so it’s all joy for him. He’s never happier than when she’s here to give lots of love and treats!

    I was so exhausted last night that I was nodding off on the end of The Bachelorette. So I didn’t get to see who got booted off. No big surprise to me today to find out it was Sean and Twilley who got the ax. Buh-bye boys! Now on to the home town dates!

    I’m glad to say that the proposal is going well and I bit the bullet and dove in the the synopsis. I couldn’t let that bout of Synopsisphobia get the best of me. It had me in it’s grips for while there though. Thanks for all your comments on that post. If you missed it you can check it out here. Ugh those dreaded synopsis! Yech!

    Best,

    Kwana
  • jack,  life

    200th Post

    What’s Jack up to? Well he’s still Jack. Which means he’s up to just about anything!

    I had new clue what I was going to write today. My current mood puts me in mind to complain and I really don’t want to do that. What would it accomplish? Nada.
    Then as I opened my blogger dashboard I noticed that this would be my 200th post. Wow! 200. That’s a huge accomplishment for a person that can’t stick to a diet for more than 3 days.
    So I’ll just write:

    Happy 200th post to me!!

    And share this pic that I took recently of a flower after the rain.

    I hope you have a great week.

    Best,

    Kwana

  • jack,  writing

    Synopsisphobia

    What’s Jack up to? Just being a Jack nuisance. I had a late night flood in the basement last night when the sink from the washing machine backed up. Well it was party time for Jack. How much fun was that? Sopping up water while trying to keep Jack out of it.

    So I think I have a Synopsisphopia. You know a phobia of synopsis. Give me a book to write and sure it’s tough, but I can make it though 300-400 pages with just a few battle scars. But ask me to do a 5- 10 page synopsis and the thought causes me to break out in a rash.
    Why oh why are they so hard? Waaa-Waaa!!!!


    Would someone please give me the magic formula? I want to hear from all you writers out there. Especially you pantsers. I’m itching over here!

    Best,
    Kwana

    P.S. Scroll down for Ask the Agent.

  • Ask The Agent,  elaine spencer,  jack

    Ask the Agent

    What’s Jack up to? Just being Jack on this fine spring day. He’s checking out the scenery and seeing what sort of trouble he can get into.

    Welcome to ask the agent for this week with Fab agent Elaine Spencer from The Knight Agency. Thanks for joining us again this week . Here goes…

    I’m curious as to what makes a manuscript you like turn into a “pass” instead of asking the author to rework the whatever portions don’t quite click with you?

    This was a left over question from an answer that I gave last week and I thought it really had some merit so I figured I would revisit.

    The above situation always involves a gamble, usually one on a couple of different levels. When I’m reading a partial (or a full) I have to give it my own personal rating system. If it’s something I’m enjoying and I see potential in and I think to myself “ok, so you like this, now how much do you like it”. I start to weight the merits of the manuscript on every level from the page that it hooks me forward. I look at the quality of the idea, the development of the plot, the evolution of the characters, the authenticity and readability to the voice, the world, the strength of the writing, the skill of the story-teller, and the list goes on and on and on . . .

    Then I stop and I look at my pros and cons. When I start to realize that yes there are a lot of things I really like, but also there are a lot of cons, that is when your question really comes into play.

    I stop and evaluate these cons and try to figure out if they are all related to one another. I try to figure out if we can go in and fix this and that, or if once we do that it’s going to be like a giant thread and once you tug, the entire story will unravel. I look at what these fixes will take. I try to figure out if it’s something simple like working on a certain writing “tick” or if it’s something greater that shows the author just isn’t there quite yet in their potential.

    When I have a story that I really love but isn’t quite there I always strike up a dialogue with the author in question. I figure out where they are in their querying process and where they are in their writing career. If they have another idea that they are working on I’ll take a look at that too to see exactly how much I love the writing of the author.

    Basically I try to figure out how serious the errors are in a partial. If they are substantial but fixable I’ll offer suggestions and see how the author does with the editorial process. If they are errors that show me the craft just isn’t there yet, there is no amount of revision that can really expedite that process so I will most likely just say, “Until next time, good luck” and pass.

    Hope that clears that up.

    Thanks Elaine and thanks to everyone for stopping by. Please be sure to post your comments and questions.

    best,
    Kwana

  • jack,  Reality tv,  Top Chef

    Ding Dong .. and She’s the Tops

    What’s Jack up to? He’s extra playful this morning and he’s following behind me with his new favorite stuffed toy so that I’ll play fetch. Jack, love. There’s work to do.

    First off, thanks for all the well wishes for my birthday yesterday. You all were so sweet!
    I’m on a chocolate high today. My head is spinning. and I’m so tired from watching the late version of Top Chef. But here goes. The final re-cap. It won’t be a goody because honestly I was watching though half-closed eyes.
    TOP CHEF-ERY
    The show opens with our lovely final 2 plus 1 that we just can’t understand, but there must be something to her because as Tom says it’s in the taste of the food. That’s what I have to tell myself so I don’t hate the show.

    There was no quickfire just straight to the real deal and it was a real doozy. The chefs got to be paired with real top chefs Eric Ripert, Dan Barber and April Bloomfield. They have to make a 4 course meal including dessert, which scares them all to death.

    Richard and Stephanie were tied for most wins and had to draw knives to see who would chose first. Stephanie won and picked Chef Eric. Richard picked Chef Dan and Lisa Got April. She was thrilled. Girl power!
    Richard is exited to pull out the Liquid Nitro and start to demo for the Top Chefs. I’m worried something is going to blow up in there. But Richard is happy as a pig is slop. The Chefs are happy that Richard is happy.
    The next day the finalist were surprised to be left on their own with no help. Richard is wild, Stephanie is nervous and Lisa is calm. She’s all like “It’s all good.”
    At this Richard makes a face like he wants to smack her into reality.
    Stephanie says “she hates her cake, yo.” I think she’s channeling, Dale.
    Suddenly it’s plate time and the judges are all dressed up and going into a beautiful dining room to be served.
    On to dinner, The finalist come out and say a few words. Blah, Blah, Blah.
    1st course. Lisa got a question mark from the judges. Stephanie was elegant and Richard was s0-so.
    2nd course Lisa’s soup was a love. Gulp. Stephanie fell flat. Richard was a like.
    3rd Lisa was pedestrian. Never good. Stephanie’s lamb was a love and Richard’s Pork had no seasoning.
    Dessert- They loved Lisa’s rise pudding, Liked Stephanie’s cake and Liked Richard’s Ice cream.
    With the commentary after ,they made it all vague so you couldn’t tell who would win. It had better not be Lisa.
    Chefs go to the not so Glad room where this is lots of Evian today. Hmm?
    They all look thoughtful. Not a lot of action there.
    The chefs are called in and questioned. Then they’re ask if they have any last words. There’s a long awkward pause and Stephanie speak up saying she second guessed herself on the dessert but she wants to be the Top Chef.
    Lisa says she should be be it or something like that. Ha.
    Richard says he thinks he choked, which shocks the judges. Quick cut to Tom for expression. He serves it well.
    There is judge talk. Blah, Blah, Blah. I like’ Tom’s scruffy look.
    The chef’s are called back in and the verdict.
    Padma please.
    The Top Chef is….. Stephanie!!!
    Ding Dong the witch is dead and the right woman won! It’s been a roller coaster season. This was a fun was to experience it.
    Can’t wait to see the reunion show next week.
    Oh and check out the A-List awards tonight on Bravo, which I went to last week!
    Best,
    Kwana